tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post6807816367268642180..comments2024-03-01T00:18:27.643-08:00Comments on THE ALCHEMIST'S KITCHEN: The Art of Revision: President Obama's Recent SpeechSusan Richhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11883699379179129887noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-31912252365986641482010-03-24T09:48:06.680-07:002010-03-24T09:48:06.680-07:00Mimi,
Thank you! I will let folks know. Or maybe e...Mimi,<br />Thank you! I will let folks know. Or maybe everyone else already does? And T. -- I will let you know how it goes with my students. My guess is their true thoughts will be -- "oh, she's one of those liberals from the East!"Susan Richhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11883699379179129887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-71960690359974768772010-03-24T08:13:10.065-07:002010-03-24T08:13:10.065-07:00First there is the initial pleasure of the poem co...First there is the initial pleasure of the poem coming on like a hurricane, and then there is the sipping-of-the-wine pleasure of revision. <br /><br />If this doesn't convince your students of the necessity of revision, I don't know what will!T. https://www.blogger.com/profile/16509409207991963533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-80391216050607289082010-03-24T06:32:43.147-07:002010-03-24T06:32:43.147-07:00Double-clicking on the image will enlarge it.
Won...Double-clicking on the image will enlarge it.<br /><br />Wonderful!Mimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13039776441665375475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-57770661220553824692010-03-24T00:15:29.332-07:002010-03-24T00:15:29.332-07:00Fantastic! I will be showing this to my students, ...Fantastic! I will be showing this to my students, too.ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-39531643197797616362010-03-24T00:05:09.301-07:002010-03-24T00:05:09.301-07:00I just wish I could have posted the extra large ph...I just wish I could have posted the extra large photo here so you could see his actual word changes. Worth taking a look!Susan Richhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11883699379179129887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4294176875047610623.post-70123373183771499462010-03-24T00:03:12.424-07:002010-03-24T00:03:12.424-07:00interesting! thanks for sharing.interesting! thanks for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02824523350743926598noreply@blogger.com